Sunday, November 25, 2012

ROUGH DRAFT-Formal Paper #2 GENDER

November 21, 2012

All Men Around The World

Dear To Whom It May Concern:

Hello my name is Alex Uribe, and I hope who ever reads this letter is doing well. I would like to address some global problems that our world is facing now, and I want to make it clear that it is and has been creating tremendous impacts on our civilization development. For years our worldwide society has been relying on patriarchy at large and it has caused many Gender inequalities throughout the nations. It is not happening just in one country or two, but in all country's around the world. Some country's have it worse than others, but they all are experiencing a form of it. From educational inequalities to workforce and beyond. Many women have to experience harsh lives because of these inequities our male society has created. Domestic Violence is a huge issue on this, because men feel like the hi-powered individuals and they see women as the helpless victims, so they take advantage and abuse the women. The male population views the female population as lower and less important which should not be the case. All men come from a woman and there is no possible way us men are better in any way than women the only object that divides us are sexual organs, for we shall all have the exact equal opportunity's in all matters.

Our world civilization has had large downfalls especially in developing country's due to gender inequalities. The effects that took place and are currently occurring due to this cause are economic, health, and domestic relationship impacts. It's like were only using half of the worlds brain, because were leaving most women out. Women can think the same way as men if they are equally educated. The only way to achieve a successful globally development is to have equal settings for all genders. By having even-handed equalities, children “girls” in particular will experience happier lives, because they will have a higher self esteem level and they won't feel like their worthless just because they aren't boys. This is a very sick and ill world, but I believe we can make a change. We need a world were gender doesn't matter and all humans have the same social status.

Gender inequality is a very serious issue although most men are not fully aware of the real outcomes. Women/girls are having miserable lives in many ways compared to us men/boys. According to The World Bank, “Nearly four million women go missing each year in developing countries, 'About two fifths of girls are never born due to a preference for sons, 'A sixth of girls die in early childhood, and over a third die in their reproductive years.” Sadly these are the real outcomes of gender inequality. Two fifths is a large number of poor little girls who never get to see sunshine just because they are “girls” and that definitely is not the right thing that should be happening. There shouldn't be a preference for sons for anyone to the point where they abort a child for developing into a girl. Fetuses don't get the option of choosing what gender they want to be born as, for there shouldn't be this cruel behavior being done to them. Not to mention the sixth that die in early childhood because of being neglected to food or healthcare for them being “girls”. This is a big issue because no child needs to face these kind of sick experiences regardless of their gender.

Furthermore in Afghanistan, domestic violence is a major issue at hand because women are treated like garbage by husbands and society. Many women have to experience torture and abuse by their husbands just because men have the mentality of “it's a man's world” and believe it's right to do so. Many girls were forced to marry an older man at a very young age. Some girls got married around age ten, and that is too young if you ask me. As these girls grow up into young women they have a very low self esteem level and they feel worthless to the point when they want to commit suicide. In this matter women have started to burn themselves alive because they claim it's the only way to escape the horrible lives they have to live. According to RAWA News, “Women's rights groups say domestic violence and discrimination is common and usually have no access to the justice system; 'Divorce is rarely an option in a county where about 80 percent of women are illiterate and often have no knowledge of their rights; 'Islamic law in Afghanistan also favors men; 'A wife must prove her husband can't provide for her, is absent for long periods, or abuses her to the point where her life is at risk; ' She also needs witnesses and often his permission to divorce; 'Even then she's unlikely to keep her children and it's that prospect which drives women like these to seek other more desperate ways to escape”. A woman shouldn't have to seek for her own death just because of the way they are treated by their husbands or society. Women need to have the opportunity to be independent if they have to be. It is not fair for a woman to be suffering for their gender. Men have to look closer at these inequalities because their causing severe damage to society.

HIV has become a pandemic disease, and everyday it keeps on pushing its way to new victims; however, gender inequality plays a big role on the expansion of this unwanted disease. According to the World Health Organization, “Norms related to femininity can prevent women -especially young women- from accessing HIV information and services.” According to the 2008 UNAIDS global figures, “only 38 percent of women have accurate, comprehensive knowledge of HIV/AIDS.” This is not even half of the world's female population being fully aware of the disease thus HIV keeps on expanding at a dramatic rate. We need women to be able to go out and learn about such subjects like this one and all other subjects. Women need the opportunity to actually get educated equally as men and not refused in any way. This can bring better health to the world, and it can help slowdown the HIV expansion.

Businesses have major gender inequities because women don't have the same access to resources as men do. Women and girls keep facing disadvantages in the business-force and work-force in most sectors. According to the United States Agency of International Development, “In agriculture, women make up more than 40 percent of the labor force, but only represent between 3 to 20 percent of landholders, 'In Africa, women-owned enterprises make up as little as 10 percent of all businesses, and in South Asia only 3 percent, 'Women compromise less than 20 percent of the world's legislators.” This a very small amount of women-owned businesses and land. Women could only do so much with the opportunity's they are offered. If we have equality for women and men we can achieve and unlock human potential. The USAID claims the just by empowering women farmers with the same access to land, new technologies and capital as men, we can increase crop yields by as much as 30 percent and feed an additional 150 million people. Many developing countries can use this additional food since there is a large number of people who don't get to eat three meals a day, however, this is only possible by having gender equality's throughout the world.

As Reihan Salam suggests in his article “The Death of Macho” that, men can either adapt to or rebel against their declining power, however, I believe we still have many inequalities to worry about and after we do fix that then we will have to adapt to our end of “Macho”. By men adapting to a balanced society between men and women it will bring many new things to our world that we have never seen, because we will be using a full brain instead of half. This can be the best choice we have ever taken in history and it will drive us to nothing but success. Men have been the dominating the world for centuries, but it's time to leave that behind and come forward with equalities for both women and men.

Gender equality worldwide is the key to bring the best in our modern civilization. No human likes to be treated unequal in any way for being part of a certain group, for we should provide equality for all gender's. If you were getting treated unequal for your gender status would you be furious to make a change, or would you ignore it and deal with it? Women have to face a lot of struggles because of the cultural gender myth that has lived on for generations. I am a man, but I am putting my voice out there for women because it is a serious issue that we need pay closer attention to. By doing so, undeveloped countries will develop faster and developed countries will improve. We need to take action against these gender inequalities as men for the sake of our women, and our world.

Sincerely,



Alex Uribe
Watsonville, CA 95076


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