PROPOSAL#2

Title: Precise Equality for All Gender's

Author: Alex Uribe

Date: 11-07-2012

Topic: The rise of female power over time although it's not precisely equal in recent times.

Exigence: I am writing about this because I want women of all kind to be treated equal as men throughout society like the humans we all are.

Intended Audience: My intended audience is general public males, and particularly men with political power.

Purpose: The purpose to my claim is to try to convince and change the male population's way of thinking towards the female population, and to take action against the inequality of women living in our society.

Claim: All men come from a Woman, for we should think twice of how we treat them referring to unfairness towards them, and all of us as a nation should make a change to view them the same way as us men.

LOGOS-We have came a long ways from the original patriarchy era that took place many years ago. Women have gained a big portion of power throughout past years which have gave them the chance to participate and experience in events that were usually fulfilled by the male dominance; however, as much as it seems that women are being treated equally I believe a patriarchy like role is well alive and present in the twentieth-first century we currently are living in. Women gained the right to vote, the right to attend a College or University, the right to serve in combat, the right to ownership of property for example, and the right to work in male based positions but there is still some inequality's taking place as of today. As women had a rise in employment positions and men a downfall there shouldn't be any inequality's towards the women.

ETHOS-There are a couple inequality's that are present today, For example women have no center of attention in the mass media like sports. Every time there is a Superbowl, World-series, or a NBA championship is always for male sports. The whole general public finds themselves more entertained by what society has made them get used to watching. Unequal pay in labor has come to a counterpoint in my argument, because women are not getting paid the same wages as men for the accomplishment of the same work. There was a bill passed in the 1960's stating that no employee should receive a lower rate regardless of their gender. It feels like this bill had no effect because there is a pay gap still in effect today.

PATHOS-No human likes to be treated unequal in any way for being part of a certain group, for we should provide equality for all gender's. If you were getting treated unequal for your gender status would you be furious to make a change, or would you ignore it and deal with it? Women have to face a lot of struggles because of the cultural gender myth that has lived on for generations stating that women can't do certain things because it may be a manly role. Men and Women have the same brains, for they can do any job a man can and maybe even better depending on their experience. If us men had a mother , daughter, or sister that was being discriminated against for being a woman we would not like it. Wouldn't you like your female family members being treated the same as you and no less?