Title: A Change For The Better or For The Worst?
Author: Alex Uribe
Date: 9/27/12
Proposition 30 can be very confusing in your decision with the vote,
because of the many different opinions you can find. Me myself chose to
go against the proposition because of the facts I found out. Going
against it came in my best will and it is the best choice for others as
well. I am sitting down and writing this to inform voters about the
negativity going on with the upcoming proposition taking effect in the
ballot in November 2012. This proposition carries some good and bad
outcomes with it, and we have to choose witch is the best choice. We
have to ask ourselves: Is voting yes the best choice or not? We have to
think outside the box in how it's really going to play it's role. The
intended audience in my op-ed is college students and other California
voters who are not fully informed with this proposition. My purpose
towards my opinion against this proposition is to change the students
and voter's point of view, and decision on proposition 30. By trying to
change their point of view hopefully the votes against it will rise.
This topic matters because our governor is just trying to overplay us by
saying that the revenues from the tax hike will go towards schools when
it is not guaranteed, and by threatening voters by saying that if the
proposition doesn't pass it will cause serious cuts in the educational
systems. These threats come in hands of the politicians to try and have
their proposition pass by scaring the voters into voting for it.
LOGOS-
The logical reasoning that i will use in my op-ed is that Prop.30 is
just a gamble or should I say a "Shell Game" as they mention in an
argumentation against the proposition. This is a gamble because us as
voters we don't know exactly what will the outcomes end up to be if this
proposition passes. They claim to fund the money for schools, but there
is numerous claims against that. As op-posers we feel like the
politicians are just trying to pass this massive tax hike to pocket some
money to replace other debts the state has. Also there is no real
re-forms towards the educational funds, which makes me ask if they are
just trying to screw over the California residents.
ETHOS-
I think I am credible as a speaker of this argument, because I
researched a few different opinions, and it seems like these facts are
very reasonable against this proposition. There are a few different
reasons why this proposition shouldn't pass, and by listening to the
opposing team of this proposition you will find out more about the truth
behind the government and politicians words on the proposition.
PATHOS-As
a student in California like many of others, we have to worry about the
future that relies on us. By raising taxes we will face even worse
financial problems than a lot of us do already. Our state has the
nation's highest sales tax, and they still want to bump it up a quarter
cent more, that does not sound like a good plan. Some of us have
families to support, and some with newborns or toddlers. Just imagine
the diaper an wipes expense. In the aftermath they add up to be very
expensive, and to top it off you still have other expenses. For example,
gas, food, clothes, school supplies, rent, and many other personal
bills. Most of us, and probably all don't make more than 250k a year, so
we don't pay attention to the income tax raise, but the sales and use
tax we have to focus on.
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